Good news everyone! I''m finally out of an editing loop and Quantum Proliferation has hit Amazon for pre-order. The release date is scheduled for November 15.
https://www.royalroad.com/amazon/B081869GVZ</a>
The finished version got several more reworks since it''s been posted here.
As always, I appreciate all of the feedback collected here and I''ll give you all a heads up once it''s situated for a free day so you all can keep a final copy. (That has to happen a bit after the official release date)
What''s new since it was posted here?
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<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Cleared up call to action in the beginning</li>
<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Gave Emily a bit more playtime and a better role to play</li>
<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Added VR sex scene (you may have caught that one depending on when you read it)</li>
<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Cleaned up a bunch around Alex''s headspace during the bank scene</li>
<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Moved some content around what Alex is building to book 3 and streamlined the scene</li>
<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Added a new angle on the attacking mercs to properly validate why they''d have the data they had and added a whole future hook into it</li>
<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Trimmed down Aubrey''s scene later</li>
<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Added the dinner scene with all of the Black Flags</li>
<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Added a few funny shoutouts to a few of my favorite books</li>
<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Added Epilogue</li>
<li style="margin-bottom: 5px">Bunch of general editing for clarity and pacing</li>
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