I''m going to be honest here. I have fluffed this up.


    When I decided I was going to start a new story, I had the choice of two.


    One was this one, A grand story, with a whole lot of ideas and I really was really like ''yeah let go for it.''


    The other was a more planned out one, that wasn''t really new in concepts and would probably have been an average story.


    Of course, I decided to write what I thought was the exciting one.


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    However, although I have thought up ideas, done some shorter stories and such, I never really done one for the long term. and frankly, I think this story shows that.


    I really want to do it justice. But I am frankly not that great a writer, I need to learn more first. So I have decided to put this one on Haitus and go with the other idea. That one I got a more planned out way of doing it, and I will probably learn a lot from doing it. Eventually I will come back to this one, but it probably wont be for a long time. Probably not a lot of people are interested, as well, it only just got off the ground. But I dont want to just delete it, and I dont want it just to be seemingly abandoned.


    So I decided to write an explantion and apologised if there was anyone that was interested in seeing where this went.