Thanks alot for reading my work...


    War Act I: The Factory of Heroes ( Scene 1 )


    If you have read this, I have already submitted the next part War Act I: The Forgotten Planet ( Scene 2 ). Hope you enjoy the next scene. :)


    I write per "Arc" not per chapter... per Scene if I can but that would take weeks before I can release anything hahahaha. ( I just always have fun editing circumstances. )


    If I ever post a single chapter that means I already made the whole ''arc'' and just fiddling with it.


    Author,


    Khoola


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    Note:


    When I started ''War'' I did not realize that I was making dialogues; scripts, that the it started to look like a ''play'' rather than a novel. After I finish the draft it was a mess.... :D ( it is a mess still... )


    That is how War "first act", "first scene" : The Factory of Heroes started out.


    *First Act is about escaping the Proving Grounds, it is compose of three Scenes... 1st Forgotten City, 2nd Forgotten Planet and 3rd "secret", then comes War Act 2 "Reality".


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    Afterword:


    This was suppose to be an experiment, as most first works are.


    "Just testing the waters" so they say, but I am starting to kinda like the story myself. Found myself sleepless trying to research to make everything as close to what I want it to be.


    Smirf''s - Rhotic Accent \u0026 Latin


    Baby''s - Latin American ( Spanish/Castellan )


    Luci''s - Royal English ( Goddess ) \u0026 French ( Witch )


    Menan''s - American English


    Acki''s - suppose to be European finding it hard to put a little of norse there, although I have work with alot of Norwegians myself. I can even understand them better than Brits.


    Shiro''s - Shiro is Shiro he will eventually speak nihonggo ( I do know basic nihonggo — just basic )


    I also work with chinese ( got myself Xue to ask about translations but he said "there is a — lot of variations of the chinese language even writing."... LOL ),


    Well, I am already planning on putting a chinese female ''mad'' scientist class, giving her title ''Dr. Frankenstein''. ( still on the works though ).


    Other than that... research on world building which takes alot of time and effort.


    *cry... cry


    . . .


    Khoola...


    This is not my pen name it is my IGN ( in game name ) more than a decade ago when being good at competitive games, like Diablo, Counter Strike, StarCraft, WarCraft, Generals can make some pocket money.


    Then I decided to dust off the name and use it as a pen name for ''War''... There is no rights for the name, and never bothered me if someone else use it, there is billions of humans on Earth, I myself derive it from a character named ''Kula''. ( I can still remember laughing out loud when enemies mispronounce it as ''ku-ala'' rather than ''kuu-la''. )


    But after submitting ''War'' at various places using the pen name, a notification came up. The Legendary work "The Library of Heaven''s Path" by Heng Sao Tian Ya is coming to an end.


    After opening the first page. Ghad I was... like — I wanted to change name on the spot or like quit... Nothing is scarier than your work getting compared to someone elses ( specially when the other work is already ''legendary'' status ). I do not even understand why it is there... nothing much I can do about it now.


    Hahahahaha...