Cough.


    Some regrets may have something to do with writing skills, but the plot is written out, which is not bad.


    In the first volume, the protagonist''s strength is weak, focusing on closed door and hard practice, and there is little interaction with the family clan.


    The second volume, the strength of the territory, ranking among the high-level sects, will have a certain influence on various events, and the system will be optimized. You can look forward to it.


    Finally, I often read novels myself. I can understand some poison points, such as:


    Weakest - cultivation - strongest - change a map - weakest - cultivation - strongest


    That is, the so-called land is not as good as dogs, and the sky is full of streets.


    As soon as the map changes, the protagonist''s strength is at the bottom, and he has to practice again and slowly in order to pretend to be forced to hit the face.


    You can rest assured of this book.