Crazy knife and sword was born in the early days of xiaobaiwen era. Although the style is good, the plot is still difficult to escape those inherent routines.
It''s nothing more than a waste firewood hero who has been bullied when he joined the Xiuxian sect since childhood. There is also a senior brother who is crazy about pulling cool hanging and exploding the sky. The elder martial brother bullied him in all kinds of ways, so he tried his best to practice and hit him in the face. Then the hero has a younger martial sister. Even if he is waste wood, he doesn''t look down on him. He is very kind to him and always gives him medicine.
Next, the protagonist and the elder martial brother rob the younger martial sister. The elder martial brother is favored by the younger martial sister''s father because of his strong cultivation, so the protagonist and the younger martial sister decide to elope. On the way, the elder martial brother killed the younger martial sister and knocked the protagonist off the cliff.
According to the law of falling off the cliff, the protagonist gets an adventure. After coming out of the mountain, he pretends to be forced to hit the face + collect beautiful women all the way, and finally defeats the elder martial brother who falls into the devil''s way.
However, the book broke on the way when the protagonist came out of the mountain costume and forced him to face and collect beautiful women. The reason is that the author Jing Yanchang didn''t carry it and hung up when crossing the three corpse God robbery.
Merit can accelerate cultivation and reduce the doom, but it can not completely offset the doom. The three corpse God robbery is extremely dangerous. Xiao Jin almost died when he crossed the first robbery, let alone others.
When the author hung up, the book naturally couldn''t be written, and this book became a regret in the hearts of many people later. Compared with the legend of the beast, this book is actually a bit dog blood. Readers rated it as a classic more because of their feelings. So how to write it well is definitely a big problem.
When Du Ziyuan saw Tang Junhao say so, he suddenly remembered a paragraph he saw in Zhihu in his dream. He said to him, "anyway, you have given up, so just write something interesting. How about I give you some ideas?"
Qifengji''s works must be original. It''s not good to change the wording of other people''s novels like eight CHILDES, and then piece them together into novels, but it''s ok if you just listen to some opinions from others. Zhou Bu''s spending money is an example.
Of the course, Tang Junhao knew about it, and one or three or two people didn''t hide it. Now seeing Du Ziyuan say so, I know he wants to give himself some ideas.
Originally, with his pride, he was unwilling to accept this gift, even his adoptive brother. But now that he has lost this time, and Du Ziyuan himself said he was writing something interesting and had a lot of fun, he is naturally willing to accompany him.
"Boss, what do you think?"
"In fact, it''s very simple. Isn''t this crazy knife and sword a standard male oriented erotic novel? How about you write it as female oriented?" Du Ziyuan wrapped his quilt like a seaweed roll, revealing his head and looking at Tang Junhao.
"Women to? What do you mean? Can a novel with more than one man and more women be changed into a novel with more than one woman and more men?" Tang Junhao was confused.
"Alas! Who told you that there are only one woman and more than one man in women''s novels? Aren''t there still men and men''s rotten articles?"
Tang Junhao was surprised at the speech and quickly opened the distance between himself and Du Ziyuan: "I didn''t expect you to be such a person? No wonder you won''t take advantage of her every time your third sister gets drunk and keep trying to get on me."
"Sun! You''re looking for death, smelly boy! Labor and capital are not fags!" Du Ziyuan was angry. "I''m kind enough to give you advice. Why do you suspect that I''m crooked?!"
"How do you explain that you lean towards me every time?"
"Grass! You don''t know that the pine nut chest is so big. You think I''m willing to lean towards you. I was squeezed by her!" Du Ziyuan said angrily. "If you don''t want to hear it, get out, get out! Next time draw a picture of the spring palace of you and other women, and then send it to the ninth princess!"
"Don''t! Elder brother, I''m wrong!" Tang Junhao immediately knelt down. "Your life-long happiness is in your old man''s hands. Don''t ruin it! What if I can''t marry a daughter-in-law in the future?"
"What else can you do? Become a eunuch in the palace. Sex is prosperous, causing disaster and cutting for permanent cure. That''s what Songzi said. If you go to the root of trouble, you''ll be clean. Maybe you can study a magic skill like sunflower Scripture."
Tang Junhao hurriedly pleaded and apologized. Finally, he even promised to take Du Ziyuan to Shihe University for health care. Of course, Du Ziyuan refused. For the first time, how could he give it to those little sisters of Shihe.
But seeing him tossing like an ant on a hot pot, Du Ziyuan was relieved. He began to talk about the passage he had seen.
"Doesn''t his senior brother often bully him? Boys bully people in the hope of attracting each other''s attention. It''s like pulling girls'' braids. You write that his senior brother actually likes him, but you don''t know how to express it. You have to bully him all day."
"Elder martial brother likes younger martial brother? EH -"
"Do you want to listen? Do you think I''m not sick?"
"Well, well, you say, go on, brother. I''ll pour you tea."
"I don''t want tea. Go and get my cappuccino."
"Yes, give brother a cup of card, card... Qi, Nuo?"
"Suck - well, let''s go on. Doesn''t his younger martial sister often visit him and take care of him? You write that it''s actually inspired by his elder martial brother, because his elder martial brother cares about him very much, but later he got on well with his younger martial sister, and the elder martial brother couldn''t stand it. In order to prevent the two from getting married, the elder martial brother with too low EQ proposed marriage with his younger martial sister''s father, and then killed his younger martial sister and knocked him off the cliff To miss, well, the reason why senior brother fell into the devil can also be set as seeing him die in front of him, so he collapsed. Finally, he killed senior brother and thought he had succeeded in revenge. In fact, senior brother deliberately let him move, just to die in his hands and achieve his heroic status. "
Du Ziyuan said the general meaning of the paragraph again: "it''s almost like this. You can fill in the details yourself."
Tang Junhao, holding cappuccino, was silly: "is there still such a way to write?"
"There is such a way of writing." Du Ziyuan raised his head proudly. Unfortunately, he is wrapped in a quilt and looks like a baby silkworm. He looks up and has no dignity to talk about.
"I know why you can get two merits in a row, and your monster''s ideas are different from what we really are," Tang Junhao said with heartfelt emotion. "Teacher Wutong Ye is really pathetic. I can almost imagine how desperate he was at that time."
"Fuck off! I''m not a monster." Du Ziyuan rolled his eyes.
Tang Junhao added, "boss, your idea is very interesting, but the outline of the novel has been set by you. I don''t know if it can be regarded as my own work."