"Old thief! I won''t call you old thief in the future, okay? Please continue to get out of the warship!"
"I never found myself so interested in such war props. Am I destined to be the God of war?"
"Ah, no warship, I''m dying! Please follow up!"
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"Ha ha, naive." Du Ziyuan smiled at these comments. I knew that these dead otaku changed their wives faster than their clothes. One second ago, they still wanted him to return his wife''s head. This second, they begged him to draw a new ship mother. I really want to draw an expression bag of "I always like xxx" to ridicule.
However, he doesn''t intend to continue painting, at least in the short term. After all, there are only five more advanced warships in the mechanism city. The others are mass-produced or the combat effectiveness is not so high, that is, they can''t become SSR. According to Du Ziyuan''s plan, only the SSR ship mother will do it himself. As for the others, let''s give them to the students.
"Xiaocui, go and help me call those students over." Du Ziyuan said to Wen cuilong, who was practicing martial arts.
"Yes."
After a while, Wen cuilong took all 30 students to his door. In addition to five relatives, the other 25 were full of curiosity about Du Ziyuan''s home. After all, this is a "holy land" that countless people want to approach but can''t reach. Usually, only the five most favored people can come to eat with the teacher. They are very excited to enter here today.
Du Ziyuan said to them, "it''s almost a month. Have you finished all your paintings?"
"Report to the teacher, it''s all done." the five disciples replied neatly.
"Well, let me review it. Jiang Yi, you come first."
"Yes, sir." Jiang Yi took the lead in handing over his cartoon.
The theme he drew was "catering", with the restriction that "food should not be the focus".
This is quite harsh. Du Ziyuan looked at it and found that what they painted was actually a struggle story of a little chef, which was a bit of a workplace style. Food is only secondary. The focus is on how the protagonist adapts and survives in the "battlefield" of the kitchen.
The creativity is not bad, but the story is a little bad. Many logic bugs force conflict.
After all, Du Ziyuan chose some people who were good at painting. He didn''t consider writing stories at all. It''s not easy to find someone who can write a novel well in this world?
However, you still have to score. Just listen to Du Ziyuan: "painter: 7 points, painting style 6 points, mirror 5 points, creativity 8 points, plot 1 point, out of 50 points, your group''s score is 27 points."
"27 points!" Jiang Yi''s face is a little stiff. It''s just over half. Is the teacher''s scoring standard too strict or their level too poor?
"Thank you, teacher." he stepped back with the painting, and the students in his group were also a little depressed. Especially for the people who are responsible for writing stories, the plot of this point is too eye-catching. It is clear that the stories they write are rubbish.
There is a saying that a serious story writer will never find out how bad his story is. In their opinion, the story is very good. Even if he doesn''t get a full score, there should be 6 points. But in fact, Du Ziyuan''s evaluation broke their fantasy.
"Don''t care too much," Du Ziyuan said. "Painting and writing stories are two different things. Some people can really grasp them with both hands, but it doesn''t mean that pianke can''t become a cartoonist. In fact, as long as you can do well in any of these two aspects, you are a qualified cartoonist."
"Thank you, teacher." encouraged by Du Ziyuan, the students'' tension was relieved a lot.
Think about it, isn''t it just that the story is not well written? Just find a partner to write a novel? Just like their master sister Ning Hanlu, didn''t she cooperate with drunken childe (NIE Xue) to become a super best-selling cartoonist? Now I went to Penglai sword sect to discuss the opening of an exclusive magazine. I''m a winner in life.
"Xiaoting''er, it''s up to you next." Du Ziyuan said to Yunting.
"OK, teacher." Yunting didn''t call him uncle Huang at such a scene, and obediently handed in her manuscript.
The theme she drew was "detective", with no restrictions. This is a new subject matter. It''s a little too difficult to add restrictions.
Du Ziyuan looked at the works of this group. The painters were on a par with Jiang Yi''s group, but there was no shortage of mirrors. It seemed that their group had a talent with a good sense of picture. Look at the story again. Sure enough, we can''t escape the framework of the big detective. It''s just that several suspects have motives, and then gradually find evidence and find the real murderer by exclusion.
Du Ziyuan hoped that the students could work hard on the technique, but obviously they didn''t do it: "painter: 7 points, painting style: 6 points, mirror: 7 points, creativity: 5 points, plot: 3 points, your group''s score is 28 points."
"Thank you, teacher." although she felt that the score was a little low, there were 27 points in Jiang Yi''s group in front, but Yunting didn''t lose much.
When the second group is finished, we can basically see that Du Ziyuan''s scoring standard is probably such a range. The third Gu Xiaowei who came forward was not so nervous.
Her theme is "music", and the limitation is that "you can''t focus on singing, writing and playing". This is a little difficult. After all, what else can you do without painting these? Ordinary people really can''t think of it.
However, Gu Xiaowei''s group is more spiritual. They actually painted a conservatory of music, and then directly began to tell the stories of the students in the conservatory. Because these students have the dream of music and are very talented in some fields, it is satisfied that music is the theme, but the focus is still on the friendship and love between students.
"Very good." finally I saw a group that satisfied me. Du Ziyuan was not stingy and began to praise directly. This makes the six members of Gu Xiaowei group very happy.
"Painter: 6 points, painting style 5 points, mirror 5 points, creativity 8 points and plot 7 points. The score of your group is 31 points."
However, the actual score is not as high as expected. Although they got a good score in the plot, there was something wrong with their painting style and mirror. Several places are obviously incoherent, which makes people look very confused.
"Thank you, teacher." although the score is not high, it is tentatively the first, and Gu Xiaowei is not much lost.
Then it''s her brother Gu Jiansha''s turn.
His theme is "killer", and the restriction is "can''t die".
The themes given by Du Ziyuan are strange, with a sense of deliberately making things difficult. But in fact, it is not blind, because each theme actually corresponds to a work he has prepared.