"What?" Du Ziyuan looked innocent, as if he didn''t understand what Cai Zishi was talking about.


    This is the most irritating. People want to beat him.


    However, Cai Zishi had no choice but to comment on him: "I can only say that I am worthy of being a disciple of Mr. Shanfeng. I am impeccable in the creativity of the story, the exquisite degree of the picture and the development of the plot. The only regret is that I am in a hurry. Many details are not fully described. I think you can draw 200 pages of content in these 30 pages to make the development of feelings more natural, but considering that it is a 24-hour limit after all When creating, if you really want to refine, the integrity of the story can not be guaranteed, so this defect is understandable. "


    "Thanks for Director Cai''s comments," Du Ziyuan answered immediately. He said to Xia''an, "Cai Daogang''s words have been made very clear. Your painting skill is undoubtedly your greatest advantage. It''s done well, and your sense of lens is also the best among all the disciples. Therefore, Cai Daocai didn''t criticize in this regard, but it''s still that problem. This competition doesn''t restrict you to choose materials. It mainly depends on how you integrate yourself. You''re obviously right The heart is too big. You just want to take out the good things, but you find that the time is too tight, so you can actually draw better on this subject. "


    "Thank you for your comments." Xia''an bowed again.


    Finally, Xia''an got 887 points from the audience and 100 points from the tutor. Du Ziyuan still didn''t recognize it.


    The yanlingtian on one side said: "no, this level of work can''t get 100 points from teacher Shanfeng? It''s really strict."


    Du Ziyuan shook his head: "I don''t see how their works are, but what they have done in the past 24 hours. I know how many resources Xia''an has. It''s really not enough for her to do so."


    Xia''an was too anxious. It was obvious that the setting, foreshadowing and climax of the sword God domain could not be contained in just 30 pages. She insisted that it could only affect the rhythm of the story, so Du Ziyuan didn''t give a score.


    Without Du Ziyuan''s 100 points, Xia''an returned to her seat in some loss. It seemed that she was going to cry. Yan Lingtian immediately ran down to comfort his students, but Xia''an pushed her away.


    This scene was naturally seen by Du Ziyuan: [shit, this yanlingtian doesn''t want to abduct my disciple? How old is he?]


    He suddenly had a feeling that "he worked hard to raise his daughter to the age of 15, but suddenly a 40 year old uncle tried to steal vegetables".


    The key is that the uncle is so handsome, rich and famous. That''s what the little girl can''t resist.


    [no, I have to discuss with frown when I go back. Should I break Yan Lingtian''s leg or his trophy?]


    Yan Lingtian, who was smiling awkwardly at Xia''an, suddenly felt a cold attack behind him and couldn''t help shivering. "Strange? Why did he suddenly have an ominous premonition?"


    After Si Xingwei and Xia''an, it''s yanlingtian''s turn to come out first.


    Their team sent an old man in his 60s, named Fangling. This man is also a wonderful flower in this competition. Other contestants are young and few are over 30 years old. However, he looks old and has been selected.


    Du Ziyuan didn''t know him, but according to Cai Zishi, Yanling Tianye, this one has made some achievements in the painting industry, but he didn''t expect to change careers at his age.


    Fang Ling has been painting ink and wash for most of his life. Naturally, his skills are not bad, but it is really difficult to change from ink and wash painting to general pen comics, so he simply didn''t turn and directly used ink and wash to draw comics.


    Ink painting can also draw fine brushwork naturally, and the painting style is also suitable for comics. It is this unique that makes him shortlisted 16 people.


    The work Fang Ling brought this time is a fairy Xia story, but he gave full play to his "man" The concept of this word. In his cartoon, Xiuxian is no longer serious, but more funny and everyday. For example, an elder''s Alchemy blew up the stove and became an explosive head, and then he whimsically transferred to a hairdresser, or a sword practitioner worked hard to practice swordsmanship just to further his carving technology.


    "It''s a very interesting story," Du Ziyuan took the lead in commenting this time. "It''s very difficult to draw such a level of painting with complete structure and exquisite picture. The only pity is that the workload is too large and the cost performance is not enough."


    In 24 hours, Fang Ling only took out 13 pages of comics. He may be trying to improve, but the number is too small, which is a defect in the comics.


    Cai Zishi also commented: "it''s really creative. I couldn''t help laughing at such cartoons just now. There may be room for further progress in the segmentation of the lens, but I think it''s already very good."


    Finally, Fang Ling got 612 points from the audience and 200 points from the tutor.


    Du Ziyuan finally gave the first recognition. It happened that he was the one with the lowest score from the audience, which made everyone puzzled.


    Sure enough, is what teacher Shanfeng sees different from ordinary people?


    Fang Ling had received a low audience score, but he just pulled it back by relying on his mentor''s score, which put some pressure on the pine nuts team.


    After thinking about it for a while, matsushiko decided to send their trump cards.


    Yunting is on!


    When the youngest princess appeared, many gentlemen shouted from the audience. After all, xiaoyunting is so cute. Her painting is beautiful, and her popularity is naturally rising.


    It is conceivable that when the program is broadcast, she will become a popular cartoonist. Even if she doesn''t draw, she can earn enough popularity.


    Of course, her business ability is not low. After all, Du Ziyuan often opens a small stove for her, otherwise she won''t be regarded as a trump card by pine nuts.


    "What will Yunting''s works look like? Let''s look at the big screen!"


    There is only one character on the whole cover, that is a teenager whose skin is as black as a piece of carbon, whose nostrils are big enough to insert onions, and whose eyebrows have a crescent scar.


    "Young Bao Zheng event book"!


    This is Yunting''s work.


    "I depend! You have an appointment, don''t you?" Du Ziyuan couldn''t help but make complaints about it. He was thinking that these guys wouldn''t all take out the things he gave in this round, right?


    However, compared with the realm of swords and swords, Shaobao is obviously more suitable for the 24-hour creative mechanism.


    And Yunting is also smarter. She doesn''t draw the beginning, but intercepts a very classic plot from the middle.