First I would like to make it clear, I am not going to stop this romance, I am also not going to leave this romance.


    Please, you can relax.


    Context: I was here in my secluded apartment while suffering the pain of COVID-19 until a friend of mine at Discord recommended me a book on Greek mythology, I was so fissured in this world that without me realizing it, I made a sketch of a romance +18. lol T_T


    I really have to look for what to do ...


    Anyway, I published a draft of two thousand words of this original novel, so I want you to look and tell me what you think, I accept any constructive criticism.


    As you know, I am a novice author, I really don''t know how to write a good novel yet.


    The name of the original novel is Eros: the God of Olympus


    ........


    Outburst: PLEASE stop calling me disgusting! just because you don''t like i_n_c_e_s_t, you don''t need to offend the author.


    As I said before, this romance is not i_n_c_e_s_t, Adrian is not Leona''s son !! F_u_c_k!


    Last week I received an evaluation calling me disgusting and giving me a low rating, the person who did this did not even explain or give a constructive opinion about the novel.


    But I know that there are people like that, after all, they want to force their selfish d_e_s_i_r_es on the author, because of that many authors stop writing, it is simply unbearable!


    1: I will not give in to your selfish d_e_s_i_r_es, I will accept suggestions and constructive tips to learn how to improve, but I will not change my romance because you don''t like it. I am the author, not you.


    2: This is a relatively slow story, I like to develop the story, but if you notice that I am too slow please let me know.


    have a nice day.